tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post7815562410965233237..comments2024-01-30T10:46:02.300-08:00Comments on Cayman Summer: Next poem - in the roughAngelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-50567737310411489882010-10-23T13:16:42.241-07:002010-10-23T13:16:42.241-07:00Such a great poem! I absolutely loved it! I can...Such a great poem! I absolutely loved it! I can't explain why, because I don't know myself, but I think that whole situation is just perfect!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02828378728962868575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-4080506518685382612010-10-23T10:29:47.362-07:002010-10-23T10:29:47.362-07:00Angela: I LOVE YOU!!!! Remember that I'm a cra...Angela: I LOVE YOU!!!! Remember that I'm a crazy reader ;)Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08609136280926686534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-19855813304636990782010-10-23T10:26:52.970-07:002010-10-23T10:26:52.970-07:00Sounds like I've got my work cut out for me. T...Sounds like I've got my work cut out for me. Talk about pressure!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-83390910281539433752010-10-23T10:22:36.827-07:002010-10-23T10:22:36.827-07:00Someone in TX is crying and screaming at this mome...Someone in TX is crying and screaming at this moment: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think if her hair was really short it will be sad but OK. For me as a reader is too much. Because what I think is like she had a problem with her hands not that she is sick and loosing her hair. Even more when the stylist give her a suggestion. Let read the rest so I can cry or get convinced /haha/.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08609136280926686534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-27483553297252839622010-10-23T10:21:09.438-07:002010-10-23T10:21:09.438-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08609136280926686534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-32127575563318050782010-10-23T10:03:40.966-07:002010-10-23T10:03:40.966-07:00So, Michelle, it's my job to convince you with...So, Michelle, it's my job to convince you with the revised poem and the rest of the chapter. I don't think I can save Leesie's hair, though. <br /><br />Thanks, Bee. Good to hear from you.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-58734045549324433122010-10-23T00:13:08.128-07:002010-10-23T00:13:08.128-07:00Oh man, Leesie's lovely hair. There's so m...Oh man, Leesie's lovely hair. There's so much angst and emotion here, I love it, love it, love it.Bidishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382938442171208326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-40621221555630277692010-10-22T19:48:23.059-07:002010-10-22T19:48:23.059-07:00This is SAD. I think Leesie shaving her hair is t...This is SAD. I think Leesie shaving her hair is too much. I had a friend who have a similar accident years ago and she cut it because of the part that was shaved on the hospital. When I asked her she told me that she will rater cut it short than not having hair at all. I thik in this part of the story a happy medium will be much better. They have been trough a lot already, so take it easy on her on this, PLEASE. If Michael could help her keeping her hair it will be much better and loving.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08609136280926686534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-6316752622330989582010-10-22T19:18:17.141-07:002010-10-22T19:18:17.141-07:00Hey girls, I'll let you in on a big fat writer...Hey girls, I'll let you in on a big fat writerly secret. Your job as a writer is to make things worse and worse and worse. Writers say you have to chase your characters up a tree and THROW ROCKS. Leesie's hair was a big rock. Thanks for deciphering my rough drafts. Have a good weekend~Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-1648015672768566312010-10-22T17:11:01.523-07:002010-10-22T17:11:01.523-07:00Oh...poor Leese!! Ohh...she must feel terrible. Mi...Oh...poor Leese!! Ohh...she must feel terrible. Michael loved Leesie's hair! Awww that's so sad. But she couldn't deal with it. Michael was devestated. Great poem.Alyssanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-91237103043031358092010-10-22T16:57:17.830-07:002010-10-22T16:57:17.830-07:00Oh my...that was so sad...poor Leesie, poor Leesie...Oh my...that was so sad...poor Leesie, poor Leesie's hair, and poor Michael who LOVED Leesie's hair...Chaleesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667176149929876108noreply@blogger.com