tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post2918687999305568824..comments2024-01-30T10:46:02.300-08:00Comments on Cayman Summer: Chapter Six Revised and topped off with New Leesie PoemAngelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-67170631459953044302010-12-07T18:37:09.040-08:002010-12-07T18:37:09.040-08:00i think your gut wrenching poems are some of your ...i think your gut wrenching poems are some of your best they are so moving and true! a true tear jerker! <br /><br />~myrrhaya~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-43844677543786470582010-11-14T10:32:28.130-08:002010-11-14T10:32:28.130-08:00Wonderful. Read it again it was so good. :)Wonderful. Read it again it was so good. :)Alyssa009https://www.blogger.com/profile/09298181765621720582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-52591758847362165132010-11-13T19:11:23.568-08:002010-11-13T19:11:23.568-08:00Ha!!! I learned everything I know about heavy brea...Ha!!! I learned everything I know about heavy breathing from you.<br /><br />Her poem was hauntingly beautiful!brandileigh2003https://www.blogger.com/profile/01669251993917961293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-56378396437645331092010-11-12T00:10:41.954-08:002010-11-12T00:10:41.954-08:00This poem is hearbreaking. I think you captured th...This poem is hearbreaking. I think you captured the emotions perfectly. It makes me cry.<br /><br />Typo: The 'too' in the second verse should be 'to', but I'm guessing you already noticed that.<br /><br />:))Bidishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382938442171208326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-62097061477352003892010-10-31T21:16:56.450-07:002010-10-31T21:16:56.450-07:00Great ;)Great ;)Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08609136280926686534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-3010575733273588902010-10-30T10:07:42.920-07:002010-10-30T10:07:42.920-07:00Me, too. Michael gets the next scene. He has to fi...Me, too. Michael gets the next scene. He has to figure out what they are going to do all summer. And Leesie will be fine outside the rehab center soon. I think that would be a good scene to leap to. A small leap it is! Thanks!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767644921005073798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-38873411320495024382010-10-30T08:21:17.627-07:002010-10-30T08:21:17.627-07:00I think it's a good time for a leap as well! I...I think it's a good time for a leap as well! I want Leese to get better...:) Poor Leesie I'm so sad for her.Chaleesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667176149929876108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-82676504153026763872010-10-29T18:14:08.552-07:002010-10-29T18:14:08.552-07:00I think it's appropriate timing for a leap, ev...I think it's appropriate timing for a leap, even if it's a small one. Maybe to a point where her progress is a little more obvious. I'm loving everything so far, though. :)Jennanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105487656463890103.post-20369551924617490982010-10-29T12:28:28.633-07:002010-10-29T12:28:28.633-07:00It's amazing how different this is from yester...It's amazing how different this is from yesterday's post. I loved yesterday's but today's is so much... more. I love it! And what a poem! That's so sad! Poor Leesie! :(<br /><br />Thank you for the shout out! :)Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02828378728962868575noreply@blogger.com