As soon as a looked at my post on Wednesday, I realized I'd forgotten to have Leesie tell Kim where she is AGAIN!!! This is the essence of revision for me. Go over it. Read the new updated. chapter Remember what I forgot while I'm driving or brushing my teeth or doing the dishes. Slapping my forehead and revising again. I added a couple lines to the chat to fix this problem. Continuity errors like this are important to catch. A good editor and then a good copy editor will do that, but it's better to clean them up yourself in the first place. It's great to have you all to help.
Here's six more chapters. Now I need to go back and reread all your comments on these chapters to see what I forgot to fix!